Sound design and all that is ok but there is something about the mixdown which is hmm. I think there is too much treble cut off on the kick, could be a mastering issue if you mastered the kick separately to the track. The other sounds have a good brightness, just something about the treble on the kick.
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Soundphase
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@KRB-MP I have to say, I think the melody is pleasant Sound design and all that is ok but there is something about the mixdown which is hmm. I think there is too much treble cut off on the kick, could be a mastering issue if you mastered the kick separately to the track. The other sounds have a good brightness, just something about the treble on the kick.
Sound design and all that is ok but there is something about the mixdown which is hmm. I think there is too much treble cut off on the kick, could be a mastering issue if you mastered the kick separately to the track. The other sounds have a good brightness, just something about the treble on the kick.Purpose, thou art the compass.
@Soundphase
Thank you for the feedback, I reduced the high freqs (trebles) of the kick but I guess it wasn't a good idea ahah
Let's see if there's the same problem in that one ahah
Thank you for the feedback, I reduced the high freqs (trebles) of the kick but I guess it wasn't a good idea ahah
Let's see if there's the same problem in that one ahah
@KRB-MP really like the overall feel of the track, melody plays out nicely, same feedback as @soundphase, there is also missing some crunch in the kick in your latest track, but I guess that could also be a taste issue. overall nice build ups and structures! good job!
@Jenskacobsen overall sound design is top-notch, in the kick switch in the mid-intro (0:28) the kick looses it's power due to a lack of bass in comparison with the kick beforehand. melody is awesome, and I really like the vocal ~(Maybe needs some timing fixes?) overall really great track!
I've been working on something raw:
What do you guys think?
@Jenskacobsen overall sound design is top-notch, in the kick switch in the mid-intro (0:28) the kick looses it's power due to a lack of bass in comparison with the kick beforehand. melody is awesome, and I really like the vocal ~(Maybe needs some timing fixes?) overall really great track!
I've been working on something raw:
What do you guys think?
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we sixteen
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@KVAIN Production wise; using another style of lead may help because the one you use sounds too similar to the screech, before the build up the bit reduced vocal snippet could have a lp cut off on it and use reverb on it to give it more epicness, in the 2nd drop/ climax before the second part of the drop starts there can be some volume and hi pass automation in the leads in order to give more emotion, the screech sounds too high frecuency wise; a multiband compressor or an analog saturator plugin may help with trimming the saturtated Hi End.
I have been working on this track not necessary Raw or euphoric, just hardstyle with a touch of mine let's say
... ed/s-4kkui
I have been working on this track not necessary Raw or euphoric, just hardstyle with a touch of mine let's say
... ed/s-4kkui
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Soundphase
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@KVAIN not my kind of hardstyle but this certainly sounds produced well, vocals really fit the idea, the screeches sound professional. Melody is ok...it works.
@we sixteen I like the rhythm build up that happens in the intro, the bass on the kick at around 1:30 isn't a clear tone - sounds too saturated, but maybe was intended, the climax execution is good but when the bass pitches it sounds off in some parts
does my idea sound stupid?
@we sixteen I like the rhythm build up that happens in the intro, the bass on the kick at around 1:30 isn't a clear tone - sounds too saturated, but maybe was intended, the climax execution is good but when the bass pitches it sounds off in some parts
does my idea sound stupid?
Purpose, thou art the compass.
@KVAIN - SICKKKKK!!!!!!!!! Great kicks and synth..
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OneManRiot
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@We Sixteen
I like your vocal sample! It could use some effects and delay to make it more juicy. I like your build-up a lot! Intropart is okay. Second breakdown with the vocal and melody is good. I’m sorry but I don’t like your melody or your synth.. It doesn’t fit the rest of the track. The second build up is really good! Your kick could use a little more low frequencies. I really like the last part of your track!
@Soundphase
I’m not sure where you are going with this idea. It had the potential for a nice intro/build-up but I would definitely try to have more of a build-up if you want to use it as a main part. The robotic voice is oke-ish sounding. The first few sentences are cool but then there is a weird pause which causes it to not flow so nice..
@DJZane
I’m not one to judge techno because it’s not my preferable style. It is mixed well! And it has more variation than the techno I’ve listened to, which is a plus for me.
I've submitted my track for a remixcontest of: Enlite - The Ones. The label is a dubsteplabel tho so I don't think I have much of a chance. Tell me what you think!
I like your vocal sample! It could use some effects and delay to make it more juicy. I like your build-up a lot! Intropart is okay. Second breakdown with the vocal and melody is good. I’m sorry but I don’t like your melody or your synth.. It doesn’t fit the rest of the track. The second build up is really good! Your kick could use a little more low frequencies. I really like the last part of your track!
@Soundphase
I’m not sure where you are going with this idea. It had the potential for a nice intro/build-up but I would definitely try to have more of a build-up if you want to use it as a main part. The robotic voice is oke-ish sounding. The first few sentences are cool but then there is a weird pause which causes it to not flow so nice..
@DJZane
I’m not one to judge techno because it’s not my preferable style. It is mixed well! And it has more variation than the techno I’ve listened to, which is a plus for me.
I've submitted my track for a remixcontest of: Enlite - The Ones. The label is a dubsteplabel tho so I don't think I have much of a chance. Tell me what you think!
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enslaver101
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OneManRiot, the vocals and the chords should be louder (perhaps 3 dB would do). You could boost the highs of the kick as well (maybe layer another sample with it or distort it). The claps should be quieter in my opinion, but that could be traced to the chords being too quiet.
By the way I liked the track! All I said could just be my personal preference.
By the way I liked the track! All I said could just be my personal preference.
@DJZane
I pretty like this old school rave spirit in your track
Well mixed and it doesn't sounds too flat for a techno track, that's a pretty good job you did there !
First attempt making a sort of "rawphoric" tune, check it and tell me what do you think about it
I pretty like this old school rave spirit in your track
Well mixed and it doesn't sounds too flat for a techno track, that's a pretty good job you did there !
First attempt making a sort of "rawphoric" tune, check it and tell me what do you think about it
but for me the melody is too euphoric to fit in the main mood of the track. It´s a nice track though.